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Thursday 27 September 2012

Shark attack?

 Guess what? I went to the Gold Coast beach with my mates and it was cool. We were playing limbo and I came 3rd. It was hard but fun I went for a swim at the wharf, but when I jumped off I got cut by the rock. Ahh I Screamed. Blood was coming out. I saw a Shark it could smell my blood and I was scared of the Shark. The Shark surrounded me.

1 comment:

Anna Faggard said...

Dear Tame,

My name is Anna, and I am a student at the University of South Alabama. That is quite a story! I would have been so scared if I was in the water and a shark got close to me. I really enjoyed your story. Good job and keep up the good work!

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