Edited version of Chaos on a farm

Once upon a time there was a old man name John. He is a farmer. He Grows Fruit and Vegetables His favourite fruit is Grape Fruit and his favourite Vegetable is Carrot. He likes carrot because it makes him see in the dark better. But one day there was this man named Jordan he was a robber he like to steal food from other farmers.

Jordan went to John’s farm around midnight and stole all his Carrots and Grapefruit. The next morning John woke up and went out to check on his crops when he went to check on them they were gone. He was so angry that he told the police and the police said “Sorry Sir there's nothing we can do about it.” “YES YOU CAN!! Said John. John walked away angry he said “YOU WAIT I’LL FIND YOU ONE DAY”

Later on that day John stuck some Mouse traps John wanted to catch that thief. The next night john was up looking out the window. He waited and waited for the robber to come back. John Heard a Noise John ran outside because the mouse traps went off. When John checked the mouse traps his daughter sophie was stuck in them she was crying.

Sophie had bad Damage to the legs and arms. She went to hospital that night and got stitched up and now she’s all better.

To Be Continued