Long time ago there was a family that lived on farm. In the family was Colin, Nikki and Jack. One day Collin went into the barn to feed the horses. When he into the barn he heard a whisper. Collin “said Mum is that you” No one replied so colin ran out of the barn and said Mum,Dad come look in the barn there's a ghost they whisper because they wanted our home.
But Mum and Dad started to laugh “Theres no such thing as ghost” said Dad Laughing his head off. “Theres Ghost in the barn says Colin” I Heard them whispering. “Sure son” said Nikki
Later on that night Colin had a nightmare about the ghost coming into his room. “He screamed his head off Mum Dad” Colin cried. They rushed into the room “what's the matter son” “Its the ghost replied Colin” still terrified. You just had a nightmare go back to sleep son.
The next morning Nikki and Jack looked in the barn to see what Colin was scared about. Jack opened the barn door and he heard the screeching sound of the door. Colin was scared of the door not the ghost.
Then Jack felt a chill in his back so he turned around and he saw the ghost. Jack squeaked like a little girl and dashed back into the house. He grabbed the phone and dialled Ghost Busters They arrived ten minutes Ghost Buster ,said “Where's the ghost ill get them” “In the barn” replied Jack,
They went into the barn with their flash equipment The ghost put up a terrific fight But they still lost the battle.
The family felt a little scared because they thought the ghosts was going to pop out of the vacuum. The family lived happily ever after.
2 comments:
Nice Ghost story Tame Graham-Lila
Hi Tame!
My name is Heather Smith and I am a junior at the University of South Alabama, which is in Mobile, AL. I am currently in the College of Education so I can soon become a teacher. Right now I am in a class called EDM-310, which is a micro-computing systems class for students who are trying to be teachers. It is basically a class where we learn how to blog and use all different types of technology and resources to hopefully better ourselves as educators one day! Each week we are assigned to a student and have to comment on that students’ blog… I was fortunately assigned to you!
I really enjoyed reading your ghost story! I cold tell you put quite a bit of time into it. I really like the part about the vacuum- that made me giggle. My daughter is 6 years old ( a little too young for ghost stories) but I read yours to her... she liked it! Thank you for the post! I look forward to reading more in the future.
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