Friday, 31 May 2013
Lost man
Once upon a time there was a lost man called Greg. He was traveling to antarctica he had traveled from mexico. When he went to antarctica that was his first time there he didn't know it was so cold. But when he got to antarctica he was so cold.
He went to look for some warm clothes for him but when he went outside there was a kind lady she gave him two kathmandu jacket. And then she gave him some winter jerseys and some hats to keep his ears warm he wanted to go home but he was lost he didn't know how to go home.
He was scared because he didn't know what was out there but he wasn't lost because someone came and picked him up on a helicopter
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You have some good ideas here Tame but you seem to have forgotten the structure for a narrative. What happened to your four paragraphs? Where did the lady come from and why was he going to Antarctica?
Tame like your lost man
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